Date: 2007-12-15 06:43 pm (UTC)
Good point about the grammatical confusion. I think "in 1959" needs to directly follow "Edmund Goulding died," and the rest of the sentence needs to be reorganized around that. Perhaps simply, "Depending on who you believe, Edmund Goulding died in 1959 either from a heart attack or by suicide following a depraved life of bisexual adventurism." Then again, you might want to frontload the depraved life of bisexual adventurism just to get everything started off with a bang. But I guess "depending on who you believe" starts it off with a mystery.

Have you read the novel? I've been curious about it since seeing the movie, which is excellent.
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