Ancillary Sword by Ann Leckie
Apr. 27th, 2015 02:15 pm
The basic set-up here, which may contain spoilers if you haven't read the first book yet, is that a star-spanning culture called the Radch Empire is ruled by an autocrat who is constituted of multiple cloned bodies who are connected with each other via what I believe is a form of artificial intelligence. Because of the huge distances in space and time that separate the various members of this entity and because of inherent contradictions in its expansionist, imperialist policies, the autocrat is at war with itself. The narrator-protagonist of the two books is an ancillary -- a kind of cyborg soldier who was once part of an AI-driven military spaceship that was destroyed by the autocrat when the ancillary killed one of the autocrat's constituent bodies. The ancillary is the only surviving member of the community of soldiers that once ran the ship. In the first book, the ancillary obtained a weapon with which it hoped to destroy the autocrat. Instead, a civil war broke out, and the ancillary was assigned by one faction of the autocrat to go to an isolated space station and defend it against possible attacks by the other faction of the autocrat. This is where the action of the second book picks up.
In the comments to my review of the first book,
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)
I read this book (which required me to read the first one as well) because it was one of the non-Puppy novels nominated for the Hugo this year. So it's possible that I only have the Hugos on my mind, but I was struck by how similar this one (but not Ancillary Justice) was to The Goblin Emperor in some aspects. In particular I was struck by how both books were about autocratic empires and about a figure within that polity who tries to help those who are oppressed and exploited. Breq, like Maia in The Goblin Emperor, is constantly shocking even those sympathetic to her with her willingness to ignore the class hierarchy and show consideration for the bottom rung. But Leckie seems to me more realistic about the limits of compassion and kindness than Addison is. What is exemplary about Ancillary Sword is that the question of justice is treated with great complexity. Breq knows she cannot really change the system and cannot really do "good". What she can do is try to find the least-bad approach to complicated problems. As an ancillary she was, in fact, a part of any number of murderous crimes in the service of the empire. She is trying to do right as best as she can, but she is part and parcel of a corrupt and abusive system.
Another thing that the Ancillary books have in common with The Goblin Emperor is a close focus on feelings. Breq was at one time part of an AI that was constantly monitoring the physical manifestations of emotion in all its component members and those of other regular non-ancillary Radch that served on the ship. Breq is now cut off from that level of constant awareness, but is fed quite a bit of similar information from the AI of the ship she's been assigned to as captain. Breq is also an inveterate observer of the physical cues to emotion that body language gives. Thus she is always paying attention to the emotional status of the people immediately around her as well as a few key crew members who are elsewhere (a neat narrative trick that resembles multiple points of view), and we as readers get a constant flood of information about the anger, anxiety, pleasure, misery, uncertainty, pride, suspicion, resentment, love, desire, etc of the characters in the story. This was remarkable enough in a work of high fantasy like The Goblin Emperor, where it mostly served to make the characters more sympathetic, if not simply pathetic, but I'm not sure I've ever seen anything like it in a work of space opera, let alone military space opera. There was a thrown-off line in Ancillary Justice about how emotion was necessary even for artificial intelligences to make decisions, and Leckie drives home the importance of emotion by the sheer wealth of observation of it on offer. And it doesn't take the place of intellectual analysis either, because Breq is always analyzing the situation from a number of different angles as well, using the emotions of others as clues to what their hidden agendas are.
Well, crap, I've already gone on at much greater length than I wanted to, and I haven't even gotten to Leckie's approach to gender in these books, which I didn't talk about at all in my previous review. The interesting thing is that the Radch don't refer to gender in their language, but this gender neutrality is represented in the text by female words. Everybody is she and her, all parents are mothers, all children are daughters, all siblings are sisters, etc. This is similar to what Delany did in Stars in My Pockets Like Grains of Sand, although it's been so long since I read that one that I forget the details how he handled it. Leckie's approach masks the genders of the characters while making us think of them all as female. Very occasionally she reminds us that this isn't true when Breq speaks in a non-Radch language that requires gender specification. These moments, in which Breq has to guess the gender of the person she's addressing (thus implying that the Radch really pay no attention to gender), remind the reader that some of the characters are male, and we mostly don't know which ones. It's a nifty piece of intellectual judo.
I said at the beginning that the reason I liked Ancillary Sword even better than Ancillary Justice is that it "kicked me in the gut in the finale." This ends up being a very romantic story, in the sense that there's a great unleashing of emotion at the climax. I'm not sure I'm capable of describing all the narrative forces at work in this unleashing, but it's related to that abiding sense of incredible tension that
![[livejournal.com profile]](https://www.dreamwidth.org/img/external/lj-userinfo.gif)