Intense, vivid, angular; great/horrific final lines. It looks like you duplicated the line breaks too, yes? Yet this strikes me as prose not poetry, in form I mean. Where did you come upon it?
I've begun a slow reading of Classical Chinese Poetry; wonderful collection.
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Date: 2010-04-20 06:01 pm (UTC)I've begun a slow reading of Classical Chinese Poetry; wonderful collection.